Elmofongo: bump
i would like someone to critique the story i posted above and offer their opinion please :)
DieRuhe: I'd be happy to. Where is it? All I see is a synopsis.
here:
I would like to ask, what do you think of my own story of post apocalyptic story I had in my head for awhile now.
(Note its pretty long)
It basically borrow much of Fallout but without the fiction, it has more realism, none that 1950s esq elements, and none of that crazy super mutants, people that are heavily irratiated aka ghouls can stay, but calling them Zombies is a deragatory word, real zombies on the other hand, I am divided.
The catch is world war 3 happenend in 2015 and later the nuclear exchange happened 5 yeras later, the story revolves around a 30 year old man who was in the war when it began, he is a very well trained and skilled soldier with a very serious,but charismatic personality, he surevived the nuclear fallout and has been surviving in the destroyed world for 10 years, and in those 10 years he had many setpiece adventures.
The climax is that originally he was trying to find a way to get to a hospitalble island since obviously not every place in the world is destroyed, however he discovers that the old governments began the war were still alive and planing something terrible, so he began to unite every survivors of the world, civilian, former soldiers,etc. to band together againsts the old governments that destroyed the world in a people's revolution. The protaginist is the leader the people's revolution who basically to the is like the next Che Guevara or the new Jesus and whatnot, after they defeated the first bad guys, the protaginist and his followers took the resources and took this revolution global against the belligerents of the old war that destroyed the world. In the end World War 4 happened with great victory of the People's Revolution, after a long time the world started to rejuvinate, and the people began to rebuild and true global peace is assured.
To long, didn't read
So what do you think?